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[Y] The Switch
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Sexuality Straight
Submitted On May18/10
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Summary:
Yet another Sammy n' Daniel fantasy. *^_^* But this one is say, a little different hehehe, Instead of following my usual male dominence and she little wolfess theme, this story is the complete opposite. It's the story of a girl taking exactly what she wants instead of asking her mate to di it for her.
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Sammy growled softly at Daniel, fur bristling. After an hour of rough housing, she had finally pinned him. His hips fit snugly between her thighs as she straddled him. "I win!" she said triumphantly, grinning down at him as she held his wrists over his head.

He whimpered, staring up at her with his blue eyes; she loosened her grip on him. "Awwww, I'm just playing..." she murmured, leaning down to give him a kiss. "No, I win!" he said, grinning up at her and arching his hips to throw her off. "Eeeek!" she squeeled, gripping his wrists harder as she came back down.

Her eyes widened slightly; when she had come back down, he had pressed further up between her legs. Instantly, she was blushing. "I... I..." she stuttered, feeling the bulge in his jeans pressed up against her. Daniel smiled up at her, his teeth flashing. "Whats the matter baby?" he asked playfully, an innocent look on his face as he bumped her up and down again. "That's...
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[Heuvadoches]
Frankly, it's far to short, and reads like a rough draft. Numerous grammatical errors as well as common mistakes that could have been easily caught by setting the work aside and coming back after a day or two to re-read it. Honestly, I expected it, though. There's a typo in the description. This tells me straight away that if the author didn't care enough to spell-check the description, expect the same sloppy work in the body. My assumption proved correct.
[Sammy Greytail]
Well I'm sorry to have lived up to your expectations. To be quiet blunt, this is just a fun passtime for me, and I couldn't care less if people wanted to throw rotten tomatos at it. And yes, it's written like a draft because it is. Also, it's kind of hard to type with a broken keyboard. And on top of that, most of my "grammatical errors" are not errors at all, they are simply my own personal way of writting, and yes, speaking. And yes, they are short because they are part of a series of stories. Nobodies perfect, hon, but I like to think that my writing is way above those who do this: "jack stard at her u wanna do it he said laughing when she said no u dont luv me then do u he said trying to make her feel guilty"
Thank you for taking the time to write out your opinion hon. You have a nice day now.
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