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[Y] Fisher Girls
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Submitted On Apr27/09
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Summary:
The story of Grey, Leaf, and Atoll.
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Fisher Girls I keep visiting this other world in dreams. Well, I visit a lot of worlds in dreams. But this one's a regular, like Earth. It's a warm ocean-world, with only one real continent, and that's polar. So the only decent-sized habitable land is a forested finger like a big Malaya or Kamchatka, stretching all the way to the subtropics. Still, the warm seas swarm with atolls, reefs, and islands. Green isles, with flocks of flowers. And the people are friendly, playful, good-natured, beautiful, and loving... So I keep going back. But on my last dream trip I got myself born there  Home I grew up in a fishing village on the southeast coast. My people are loving, but so traditional! I felt stifled as I grew older--good girls obey the elders; good girls are modest and quiet. In revenge, I'll draw myself tall bold and glamorous. I'm not quite sure how we looked. Long noses, ears, legs, and tails, gray fur and grace--but were we feline, canine, or more like lemur peo...
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[Aaralyn Mcalister]
Again I must say that I love your detail work! Im not sure if it was how the story turned out format wise when you attempted to upload it here or not, but the read would be easier if the paragraphs were not so large. Its easier for the eyes to read through when its broken up a bit more.

Other then that it was a bit short. Which is a problem when you write so well and people want to read more. Very Happy
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