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Near Perfect Part 3
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Sexuality Gay
Submitted On Feb4/10
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She jogged to keep up with his pace. “He didn’t mean that and you know it! Michael, honestly! Do you really think that he was telling the truth?! You were offering to separate yourself from your family to be with him! He wanted what was best for you,” she contradicted him. Michael put the last box in the trunk and slammed it shut, whirling on her. “And how can you be so sure about that?! What do you know about him?” he snapped. Elizabeth pursed her lips in disgust. “I know that he deserves better than you if you’re giving this up so easily.”
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Near Perfect, Part 3 of 3
When Adrian pulled into his weed-choked driveway, Alex walked across the lawn toward him. He’d been waiting most of the afternoon for him to get home, but he wasn’t someone the punk was in the mood to deal with.
A small part of him wanted to mend things with him so his chest wouldn’t ache so much, but there was no guarantee that he wouldn’t just leave again.
He tried to go around him, but Alex caught his shoulders. “Adrian, please. Will you listen to me for just a second? Give me a chance,” the college student pleaded with him. He grounded and let him speak.
“My parents forced me to leave when I was threatened by a boy at school. They didn’t give me an option, but I guess it was partly my fault because I told them about it. I came back for you,” he said, confident Adrian could be won over.
His bright blue eyes narrowed dangerously and he let him have his pent up emotion, “If you had really cared for me at all, you wouldn&rsq...
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[Sunshinewolf]
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Jun16/10 13:56:23
gahhh writers block xD
[Aaralyn Mcalister]
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Feb4/10 11:09:42
Thank God you spaced out the areas that kept switching views. Its one of my irritations when someone meshes it all together. You have a fan! Keep it up!
~Aaralyn~
[Blondefox86]
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Feb6/10 00:49:54
Hi, new here.. really like the direction you took in the 2nd part of this story... but part three seems to have little to any connection to part 2.. am i missing something?
[Sunshinewolf]
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Mar7/10 04:16:36
hmmm, I see where that could have been inferred let me go back and fix it Smile thank you for letting me know hun Smile
[noop237]
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May14/10 14:51:30
That was a good story but what like Blondefox said their is a long gap between 2 and 3,Haha i went back and read number 2 about 8 times saying "What?! Am i missing something or am i just crazy?". but besides that this story was very good. And I really hope this isnt the last chapter to the story.
[Sunshinewolf]
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May29/10 23:23:35
I havent had a chance to revise it yet please excuse the long wait this weekend I am working on it :3
[WolvenFury]
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Nov5/10 09:29:14
This frustrates me soo badly, you are a gifted writer, with THE best story I've ever read, but the transition between part 2 and 3 halted my immersion into the story as I found my self asking questions.

Yeah... You made a mistake, so does everyone, please carry on with this story please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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