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Near Perfect
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Sexuality Gay
Submitted On Feb4/10
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Summary:
Michael’s heart stopped hammering. A boiling anger flushed his face and clenched his fists. “You jerk! I can’t believe you! Swamp Tigers?!” he shouted at him furiously. The older teen couldn’t help himself; he burst out in fits of rolling laughter. Michael’s fury lost its edge, but he continued yelling, “You bastard! I believed you too!” “That’s what’s so funny about it.” “I hate you! You suck!” Adrian’s expression melted to one that was very sly. He leaned close, his voice a husky whisper, “Only if you want me to.” The flush on Michael’s face deepened to near purple, his mouth working like the fish they’d caught earlier in the day.
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Near Perfect Part 1
      “New school, new house, new life, new problems, new enemies… Moving sucks.” These words spilled from the mouth of Michael Knickes as he shifted his hefty backpack from on shoulder to another. This was his second day in the city of Kerkland. Despite what his parents said, Michael was convinced that Kerkland was more of a miniature suburb than a city. After living the first half of his life in Chicago, nothing could really be classified as a ‘city’. The reason they’d shifted their home to this place was his father. It was his work that had forced the move, but Michael didn’t really think that he had to drag the rest of the family along. He was never home anyway. Let him come live in the backwater town and let them stay on 14th street, a block from a movie theatre and the coffee shop with internet. Michael doubted that Kerkland even had a movie theatre, let alone a place like E- Java. It was situated in Louisiana, ...
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[Aaralyn Mcalister]
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Feb4/10 10:37:08
Excellant writing skills! Wonderful details and easy to follow. If the fiction portion of this site picked up a bit more you would probably have a wonderful following if you keep this kind of work up!
[WolvenFury]
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Nov5/10 09:25:26
You are the best writer I have found on this site. The way you write makes the story come alive in my head, as if I was there feeling th characters emotions, you're good man. After reading this, I couldn't stop, I swiftly moved to the second part and then the third, you really need to get the trasition between Part2 and Part3 sorted, as I couldn't really figure out what was happening to who, It almost made me stop reading... almost

Please I beg you, continue with this story and add more parts, love your adoring fan WolvenFury (and before you say, yeah... I'm a guy)
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